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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实。

用户练习作文:

Snap judgments can be made in many conditions, such as knowing little about the events, carelessness thinking ect. While whether those judgments are believable,my answer will go for no. The triggers for that are as follows: You know when we were at primary school, we have many intimate friends , nevertheless, due to young, it is unavoidable to cause fairly conflicts with our classmates, and also you see, it is important to be impartial as a teacher, provided that the teacher make a snap judgment when handling such kind of issue, dissatisfaction will occur ,which will push the condition worse rather than relieve it. Another key factor is if you trust the snap judgment, you would go on in a wrong direction,additionally,making mindless decisions is an unresponsible behavior, as a saying goes:think twice before action. We should develop a good habit of thinking before making a judgment.

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