2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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As is known to all, now on online shopping has been become one of ways fishion. The truth of it is deep and profound. At the same time, on line shopping has many adventages but it has many questions There are numerous examples supporting this proverb. A case in point is the goods of the line platform is not truth, may be you will buy some worse things. For anther example, If the goods lost in the road or you will receive the goods after one month. Moreover, your ord- er aways can not deal with imposible. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that online shopping is prevail in this society. But is worth nothing is we must shopping with the serious attitude. To conclude, we all have to stay alert to avoid being cheated.