2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者在句法层面做的很棒；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活。

As is known to all, now on online shopping has become one of ways fashion. The truth of it is deep and profound. At the same time, online shopping has many advantages but it has many questions. There are numerous examples supporting this proverb. A case in point is the commodity of the line platform is not truth, may be you will purchase some worse things. For another example, provided that the goods lost in the road otherwise you will receive the goods after one month. Moreover, your order can not figure out all the time. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that online shopping is prevailling in this society. But is worth nothing is that shopping with the serious attitude. To conclude, we all have to stay alert to avoid being cheated.