加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
First, i am expect to visit YunNan provence with my family . AS well is konwn , The YunNan is a beautiful space . Second,i want to play basketball with my friends every day. Then, i will learn English for my highschool. Well,this is my all sunmmer holiday.What do you think ?Oh, my best friend,i miss you.
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