增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
First, I expect to visit YunNan provence with my family . As is known all , YunNan is a beautiful place . Second, I want to play basketball with my friends every day. Then, I will learn English for my highschool. Well,this is my all schduel for summer holiday.What do you think ?Oh, my best friend,I miss you.
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