文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;从句偏少,建议平时练习中加强从句的练习;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
First, I expect to visit YunNan provence which is admired by lots of people with my family. As we all known , YunNan is a beautiful place. Second, I want to play basketball with my friends every day. Then, I will learn English for my studying of highschool. Well,this is my schedule for the summer holiday.What do you think ?Oh, my best friend,I miss you.
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