句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
First, I expect to visit YunNan provence which is admired by lots of people with my family. As we all know, YunNan is a beautiful place. Second, I want to play basketball with my friends every day. Then, I will learn English for my studying of highschool. Well,this is my scheme for the summer holiday. What do you think ?
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