增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章词汇使用比较恰当,高级词汇积累不足;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
First, I expect to visit YunNan provence which is admired by lots of people with my family. As we all know, YunNan is a beautiful place. Second, I want to play basketball with my friends every day. Then, I will learn English for my studying of highschool. Well,this is my scheme for the summer holiday. What do you think ?What is your plan? I hope to recieve your letter soon.
人气:43发布:2016-04-15
人气:36发布:2016-02-20
人气:46发布:2016-03-18
人气:17发布:2016-05-19