正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
First, I expect to visit YunNan provence which is admired by lots of people with my family. As we all know, YunNan is a beautiful place. Second, I want to play basketball with my friends every day. Then, I will learn English for my studying of highschool. Well,this is my scheme for the summer holiday. What do you think ?What is your plan? I hope to receive your letter soon.
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