语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇量积累不错,一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,有个别拼写错误。
It is interesting to think that waht will happen if everyone in publice speaks in their dialects, which is pouring out of people's mouth with strange accent, tone and even dirty shabby words. Would it be possible for people to communicate properly, more important,to understand what others said. The answer is definily not. So it is easy to see how important it is for people to communicate in a language that is shared and understood by all of us in public. On the one hand, an accepted language is not only reprensenting one that is used by a special group of person or represents the only language that people must use and learn. But it is a standard language for a country to reperesent its voice throughout the country and what one expresses in that language can be understood by everyone in that country. For exemple, if our president dlivers a speech in his dialect, obviously, since China has so many different dialects, how many can really what he said. What if he has something emergent, how can we know to help. On the other hand, since public are places where people from different places who speak different gialects gather togeher, an accepted language instead of dialets is more sanitary to them to discuss, express and really understand each other.There is no coversation without speaking the same language. All in all, it is not to deny the value of the special dialects that exist in every different places; however, if we want to go out of our comfort zone, an accepted lnguage will help you more with more colorful ideas, point of views.