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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9032
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
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加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达,高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

Some people agree with abandoning eat things in railways and bus.Nonetheless,other people disagree with it. In my view,I agree with it.as we all know,we should promise ourselves to leave dity.when we eat foods in railways and bus,we could interrupt other people.maybe someone focus on somethings.Then,we eat some foods and feel very happy.however,it maybe influence someone.what’t more,while we eat some foods.there have some tastey in the air.it could cause someone feeling terrible.So,we should eat food before take bus or railways.as the same time,we should abandon to eat food in bus or railways. In a word,it is impolite that we eat food in bus or railways.the government should take measure to improve the environment in public.from that,our society can become more and more better.

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