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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
As is clearly depicted in the thought-provoking cartoon, the attitude two men who are seeing a scene that the water in the bottle is spilling out. One person with depressed expression on his face is still standing in the situ and saying‘games over'. It seems that he has not thought about remedial measures. While the other hurries to lift up the bottle, smiling, thinking feels good that we still have some. How differently they are! Obviously, the writer indicates that choosing a right attitude to face the challenges is important. I remember a little poem by Tagore, ‘If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you also miss the stars'. It has deeper information， the same as the cartoon. Problems can always divide people into the pessimistic and the optimistic. As pessimists are always obsessed with what has been lost, on the contrary, optimists, concentrating on what may still be possible. It is fairly clear that keeping positive and seizing opportunity would make a great contribution to success. Accordingly, the most pressing matter of the moment is to cultivate healthy psychological quality and enterprising spirit. In my humble opinion, Schools and families ought pay attention to psychological health; as for the whole society should try to promote optimistic attitude.
