作者词汇基本功很好,单词拼写检查要更加认真;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
What I Have Learned from my years at University What is knownto us is that your learing time at university is one of the most significant parts in your life. Different people learn diverse knowledge and other skills in that they are in different universities. As for me, although it's rather short and fast for the spicous four years, it has made great influence on me. In the first place, I've learned a great number of professional knowledge.My major is about English, therefore, you have no alternative but to remember words day by day,listen to radio such as CNN and BBC week by week and look through articles in English year by year. As a result, everyone in our colleage has a big step before gratation, no expection of me, collecting much knowledge by hard working and persisting.In the second place,it is how to teach that is the most important thing I've learned in four years. Being a middle-school English teacher taked into account, I have tried my best to improved this kind of skill.What is out of your imagination is that I haved elected all subjects connnected to teaching and taken teaching competitions as much as possible.NO pains, no gains. Once you're concerntrating what you've decoted to and sparing no effort to go after your goal, you won't get disappointed.The last but not the least, getting along well with all-age-cicle people is a very inevitable to abapt to social envionment.Honestedly speaking, a university is a small mirror of a big society.There's a widespead phenonmen that the growing number of adult-students possess less and less confidential friends at university.The reason is that those students take part in numerous clubs in order to make acquaintance with others . What're more, they also take some part-time jobs in free time. So I do.NOt only I've joined somes clubs but also I'm invoved in paid jobs.Consequently, I know how to get well along well with all-age-circle people. What you've learned is largely depended on what your time is spent. Just one old saying said: When you look back the road, you can say you have no regret.