现象
经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’. These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents.Sometimes we argue with our parents, what's more, fight with something .We always don't talk with others after that. We have different think about something. We often argue with others after test. Parents look up to grade. If we fial the test, they will talk too much with us.We will feel very boried. I think we should communicate more with our parents.