现象
经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’. These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents.Sometimes we argue with our parents with something . We always don't talk with others after that. Eventhough, We have different think about something. We often argue with others after test. Parents look up to grade. If we fail the test, they will talk too much with us.We will feel very bored. I think we should communicate more with our parents. Provided that you do what I have said, you will get good with your parents.