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江苏省盐城市初级中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试写作:与父母相处的问题

发布时间:2013-06-24 18:03浏览次数:2119
要求:
你将代表学校参加盐城市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:


现象

经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话

原因
1、父母过分关注分数
2、我们……

措施(不少于三点)
1、我们应该和父母沟通
2、我们……
3、我们……

要求:

1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;
3、词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4、不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.
These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ____________________
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    That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
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评语:

如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’. These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents.Sometimes we argue with our parents with something. What's more,we always don't talk with others after that. Even though, we have different opinions about something. We often argue with others after test which counts a great part in our daily life. Parents look up to grade. If we fail the test, they will talk so much with us.However,We will feel very bored instead of being encouraged. In addition, we should communicate more with our parents who really care about our life. Provided that you do what I have said, you will get good with your parents.

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