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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71623
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中高级词汇使用贫乏,同时拼写错误稍多。

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My hometown is a very beautiful place where each season has its own characteristic feather. In spring,all kinds of flowers will bloom and the smell indeed attracts those who is passing by them,theaves of trees becomes blue so that we will feel comfortable when we lie on the grounds.I like my hometown particularly when it is in spring. The landscapes of my hometown is also superb,as long as you come,I ensure you must like it and be suprised by natural scenaries.Because my hometown is famous for no industrial pollusions therefor the sky is more bluer and the air is more fresher.

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