复杂句使用不错,句法规范;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中高级词汇使用贫乏,同时拼写错误稍多。
My hometown is a very beautiful place where each season has its own characteristic feather. In spring,all kinds of flowers will bloom and the smell indeed attracts those who is passing by them,theaves of trees becomes blue so that we will feel comfortable when we lie on the grounds.I like my hometown particularly when it is in spring. The landscapes of my hometown is also superb,as long as you come,I ensure you must like it and be suprised by natural scenaries.Because my hometown is famous for no industrial pollusions therefor the sky is more bluer and the air is more fresher.