2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a very beautiful place where each season has its own characteristic feather. In spring,all kinds of flowers will bloom and the smell indeed attracts those who is going to passing by them,leaves of trees becomes blue so that we will feel comfortable when we lie on the grounds.I like my hometown particularly when it is in spring. The landscapes of my hometown is also superb,as long as you come,I am to ensure you must like it and be suprised by natural scenaries.Because my hometown is famous for no industrial pollusion therefore the sky is more bluer and the air is more fresher.