2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文章词汇表达灵活恰当，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。

I heard about that Franklin Delano Roosevelt said:"The only thing we have to fear is fear itself,nameless,unreasoning,unjustified terror which paralyzes needed efforts to convert reteart into advance",which shocked and raised me,I never heard this kind of word before today,it is a dream to change the world and the determination to make the change happen that help him establish a great company and make the life different