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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者词汇基本功很好，单词拼写检查要更加认真；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Computer vs Face-to Face Cummunicating online as a pop ways of communication is commen in nowadays society.It do bring about plenties of merits to our life.For instance,we get the instant messages from our families,friends or alients which subtract time and improve efficiency.Plus,it spares most of us from being shy or embarrassed when we conduct a face-to-face talking.To some extence,it broadens our relationships while we make our efforts to chat with those who we cannot talk to before. On the other hand, every advantage has its disadvantage.while we contact others by computers,it might cause some prombles whith displayed as following.Firstly,overusing electricdevices do harm to our eyes with a result that lots of people get eyesights dropped. And what comes to next is one might dismiss the real world with the Inernet ones.What’more, We get less and less meeting with those who eager to see you as the parents in the picture above.Unlike the disadvantages memtiomed above,face-to-face communication as a orginal and less harmful way do not likely to be replaced by the electric ways. To better communication,we must use less computers and more face-to-faces.
