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Xing xing is my best friend,she is a good girl,she has a long blak hair,and she is taller than oter girls. she always heip people,she likes reading and cooking,she likes dog and cat. She want to be a teaer,she tink chirdrend is very cute. Now her dream is come from ,she ask me nothing is diffcult,if you put you heart into it.