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Everyone knows Westlake in Hangzhou. It's so famous that lots of people visit it every year. When my friend comes, I will take her to the Westlake. Here are my reasons:First, the Westlake is beautiful no matter in which season.Second, it is free for everyone. Last but not the least, it inflects the features of south.