Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Computer vs Face-to Face Cummunicating online as a popular mean of communication is common in nowadays society. It does bring about plenty of merits to our life.For instance,we get the instant messages from our families,friends or clients which subtract time and improve efficiency. What’s more,it spares the majority of us from being shy or embarrassed when we conduct a face-to-face talking. To some extent,it broadens our relationships while we make our efforts to chat with those who we cannot talk to before. On the other hand, every advantage has its disadvantage.while we contact others by computers,it might contribute to some problems which displayed as following. Firstly,overusing electronic devices does harm to our eyes with a result that lots of people get eyesight dropped. And what comes to next is one might dismiss the real world with the Internet ones.What’s more, we get less and less meeting with those who were eager to see you as the parents in the picture above. Unlike the disadvantages mentioned above,face-to-face communication as an original and less harmful way do not likely to be replaced by computers. To better communication, we must use less computer and more face-to-faces.