雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中从句数量不足；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇的使用还需加强。

If I have enough time and enough money,I would like to choose travel to other countries, as Thailand, Janpa, America and so on. Last new year holiday, I had traveled by plane with my wife to Thailand about one weeks. we had a good weeks on Thailand, the island of the krabi was so chariming and the seawater was so clean, the food of Thailand we liked so much. This year, our family include my wife and my little daugter, travel to ZhuHai and the east huaqiao city. we felt so many perpons anywhere, and the food was so expensive . a bottle of water was bought eghit yuan , and a bowl of noddle was bought thirty yuan. So I kown well about the travel to other countries good and bad to local travel. If we would like to choose to travel to other countries, firstly, we should at least one week time ;sencondly, we should read for enough money for airport and hotels;thirdly, we should have learn local language or english and other things. but traveling to other countries to make your exciting feeling , and let you feel different food and people, and let you have a world sight. I will find some chance to travel to other countries in the furture.