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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视。

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In recent days ,we have to face a problem that weather Beijing limiting the buying car . People views on Limiting the Buying of Cars vary from person to person . some hold that approves Beijing Limiting the Buying the Cars ,because they think Beijing has a poor traffic. buying cars not only increase jam tracffic,but also pollute the atmosphere. However ,others believe buying car is a good thing . for one thing ,which brings more convenice for workers,for another ,it is beneficial to the car manufacturers,so as they supply more job to people . Taking into account all these factors . I believe that Limiting the Buying of Cars is good for our life ,because Beijing has not fresh air ,if more cars release air to harm our envoriment ,which is a so scard thing ,It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.

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