雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；高级词汇使用贫乏，注意一下个别拼写错误。

Advantage and disadvantage of traveling to other countries If I have enough time and enough money,I would like to choose to travel to other countries, such as Thailand, Janpa, America and so on. Last new year's holiday, I had traveled by airport with my wife to Thailand about one week. we had a good week on Thailand, the island of the krabi was so charming and the seawater was so clean, the food of Thailand we liked so much. This year, our family include my wife and my little daughter, travel to ZhuHai and the east huaqiao city. we felt so many perpons anywhere, and the food was so expensive . a bottle of water was bought eight yuan , and a bowl of noddle was bought thirty yuan. So I kown well about the travel to other countries good and bad to local travel. If we would like to choose to travel to other countries, firstly, we should at least one week time ;sencondly, we should read for enough money for airport and hotels;thirdly, we should have learn local language or english and other things. but traveling to other countries to make your exciting feeling , and let you feel different food and people, and let you have a world sight. I will find some chance to travel to other countries in the furture.