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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71623
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

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I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English. You are one of the best teachers who I have ever met. There are many good points that I learn from you.During these days in your class, I have acquired much knowledge from you and it really helps me a lot. Firstly, you let me know what the west thinking pattern is -straight thinking pattern. As an English learner, it is important for me to understand the difference between them. There is no denying the fact that this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. What's more, I'm glad to be your student, and I am very happy to learn the course under your guidance. English is an important tool, through which we can share our experience with the world. I treasure the chance of learning English, and I enjoy the happiness from your course.

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