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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1782
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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The companion of friends can offer us consolation, encourages, and sometimes, inspirations. So many people would like to study with a group of students. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer staying alone during the course of learning. It is problematic to claim that friends cannot promote our studying progress, but it is not the same as saying that studying alone can not be an effective way. And my reasons are as followings: My main reason is that studying alone can provide us enough silence which is necessary for a person to get immersed in his learning. Just as a flock of ducks would never stop making noise when they meet, so stting together, a group of people always forget their original goal, instead, they do nothing but to chat with each other. Under such a circumstance could none gat rid of the disturbtion. In contrast, we can freely enjoy the time we spend alone in an absolute severe atmosphere. My another reason is that, by studying alone, we can arrange our schedule more easily. Even in comparison with our bosom friends, it is hardly difficult to figure out that we have totally diferrent timetables. For example, for one of us, 11 AM is the time for him or her had lunch, but for the other, he or she likes to stay in the classroom for another two hours. At that moment, studying alone is the means of choice. Different people live in a different way, so in order to be free from the frequent choice of following whose shedule, we would better to study without others. All in all, I strongly hold the standpoint that studying alone is a better way for study. However, what I mean is not that we should live alone all the time or abandon our friends. Friends are an internal component of our whole life, we should cherish the friendship we have tied, but we can communicate with our friends in the rest time of studying, and I do think it is much more beneficial for us to cultivate a harmonious atmosphere between us and our friends in leisure time rather than in the seriousness of learning.

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