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语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；词汇量积累方面尤其高级词汇的积累要再接再厉，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
once upon a time, I was not so confident about my study and was abjct to being pessimistic when confronted with frustrations. However, things virtaully to change whne Tom, my closest friend in a uiniversity, strived to encourage me. I really appreciate his help. I used not to be good at english, however, whenever I confused at teacher's explanation, he always interpreted it to me in an explicit way, from which I found english not so formidable.
