2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi,my friend,I will introduce a beautiful town to you,the name is changsha,this is a old city and have 1000 years history,I hope you can arrive here and feel us regional custom. changsha have many delicious food,such as chou tofu,oil cake,noodle,etc.you will love them if you have a chance to eat its.changsha also have many beautiful views.for example,yue lu mountain,xi han ancient tomb，the window of world.etc.these places are famous view and have long history.its valueable,you can see different scene. my dear friend,you will love my hometown if you come in.