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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,高级词汇积累也做的很棒;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Culture Feast With the development of economy globalized, culture is integrated from all over the world. This picture vividly describes a delicious and nutritive culture feast, which includes kongfu, technology and religions.First,with the communication of different cultures , culture of the world has a prosperous tendency. A special point of this picture is that these varies styles of culture are included by a China traditional “huoguo”. We can see that China who has 5000 years historical culture is opening door to absorb different but excellent culture in order to enhance our cultureal strength and enrich our spiritual nourishment. In the culture communication, we are good at absorbing the advanced culture to make up our shortcomings. Moreover, culture combination brings more changes except culture. Through the culture combination,we can learn advanced technology and management approach, improve people’s level of artistic appreciation. That is also the reason for China conduct the reform and opening-up policy. One point requires being emphasized is that we must keep characteristic of our culture.