采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒。
Online shopping, which is prevailing among the adolescents, is one of the most fashionable shopping means at present. It is convenient to shop online. Firstly, you can shop online at home instead of wondering through the malls and hunting for your commodity, which may kill plenty of your time. There is one more point, commodity online is much cheaper than that in the malls in that renting. Each coin has two sides. There are quiet a few disadvantages existing in online shopping. It's impossible for you to try or check the functions of commodity and you must be patient enough to wait for its arrival after you order it on line. In my opinion, Online shopping is a good choice for those who has not enough time to wonder through the malls. shopping in the malls is pleasant for persons in leisure, especially with some close friends.