注意:
1、 信的开头已写好,只须接着写。
可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯。2、字数100 左右。
生词:
电子市场:E―market
正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Dear Sir, I bought an MP3 player at ABC E―market three weeks ago. I had used it several days when the player didn't work. I took it to the market but they told me it was the factory's fault, and that I should take it to the factory. S0 I went to the factory. Luckily, the man in the factory agreed to help me. He said he would send it back to me in 7 days. But I waited two weeks. I don't know what has happened. If you get everything ready for the player, will you please send it back to me as soon as possible. Thank you for your help on this mater. Very truly yours, Li Dong