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请你以David的身份给Mary写一封信, 介绍你自己和你家人的情况。你可以谈谈他们的工作和他们所喜欢的食品。信的开头和末尾已经给出。你需要用下面的
提示词: family, happy, teacher, doctor, fish, chicken, vegetables。
要求60个词左右。
Dear Mary,
I'm David. I'm from England. _________________________________________________增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。
I have a happy family. My family has three people. My father, my mother and I. I am a student, my mom is a teacher, my father is a actor. We have difficult hobbies. My father likes swimming, my mom likes listen to music, but I like reading a books. My father is a cool man, but he usually go shopping with me. My mom is a great woman, she always make lots of delicious food to my. I hope me become a good student. I have a great dream. I want to be a singer in the futhure. I love my family. I hope us happy forever.
