衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,但词汇表达丰富度不足。
I will take him to see the Wenhua square which is the most interestingplace in my homtown.We can go fishing in the pond,cycling on the small way as well as play games in the video game room.Then we will eat the delicious food which is our specialty. Last but not least,I will take him to the library in the square.By the way,I believe it is a good time for us.