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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4831
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

The way to happiness When it comes to the topic of happiness, everybody has his own interpretation. While there's another prevailed opinion existing currently. People firmly believe that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. To me, I hold the view that happiness itself exists in the procedure of achieving it. You can't realize the joy of getting happiness provided that you catch it easily. Happiness isn't equal to money, leisure, freedom and so on. Once I was in my childhood. Attracted by a famous novel named Gone with the wind, I couldn't sleep well all night. In order to get my favourite, I worked as a waiter in a restaurant and a postman to deliver the magazines. Fortunately, I get through the problem. At the moment of receiving the book, I felt nobody in the world was luckier and happier than me. I was drugged in the procedure of getting happiness, which was so fantastic to me. Enjoy the joy of hunting for happiness and you will find happiness is everywhere.

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