2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Nowadays,Online Shopping is very popular in our life,and many people think it is fashion. Online Shopping has many advantages.First,we can buy goods that needn't go out.This can save our time and very convenience.Second,there are many good for us to select,we can choose what we like at last.Last,many of those good are very cheap.So we can save our money. Of course,Online Shopping have questions.First,it isn't safety,we feel isn't at ease when we shopping at online.Finally,we can't know the quality of the goods.After all, we only can see the goods in the internet, but we can't touch it. I think when we shopping in internet we should careful.Check out store when you buy what you like online.