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Lang Lang Lang Lang is a pianist which was born in 1982 in shenyang, he has learned to play the piano since 3 years old, and he went to USA to study music in 14 years old. He has been given concerts all over the world and performs with many world famous musicians in the same stage. He also win a lot of prize. As far as I am concern, he is the action model for the young people. and he is also the one of the outstanding behalf for our country. He make a contribution to the development of the world music. I like his performent very much, it not only include the exquisite skill, but also have a large contect of the emotion. It make people very touch after listening his performance.
