小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；文中从句过少；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a best friend girl who one of friends is my friends. When it was first time that I had met she, I fall in love with she. So, I composed with he every day, while is very happy! how to that he become my girlfriend? I said to she that I love you. Can you get my girlfriend? I would have been composing with you.