小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a well-behaved friend girl who is one of friends. When it was the first time that I had met she, I fall in love with her. I composed with he every day, while is very happy! how to that he become my girlfriend? I said to she that I love you. Can you get my girlfriend? I would have been composing with you.