如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章上下文衔接自然。
I have a well-behaved friend girl who is one of friends. When it was the first time that I had met she, I fall in love with her, Therefore, I have been composing with her every day, while is more than happiness! how to that she became my girlfriend? I said to she that I love you. Can you get my girlfriend? I would have been composing with you.