采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视。
I have a well-behaved friend girl who is one of friends. When it was the first time that I had met she, I fall in love with her, Therefore, I have been composing with her every day, while is more than happiness! How to that she became my girlfriend? I said to she that I love you. Can you get my girlfriend? I would have been composing with you and always stay here by your side and never leave till I die in December 28, 2015 when is always worth the aftertaste of the day.