小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识扎实，但从句稍微偏少；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好。

I have a well-behaved friend girl who is one of friends. When it was the first time that I had met she, I fall in love with her, Therefore, I have been composing with her every day, while is more than happiness! How to that she became my girlfriend? I said to she that I love you. Can you get my girlfriend? I would have been composing with you and always stay here by your side and never leave till I die in December 28, 2015 when is always worth the aftertaste of the day. Therefore, every day we are together, learn together, dinner together, sing together, do a lot of things I can't forget things together.