小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a well-behaved friend girl who is one of friends. When it was the first time that I had met she, I fall in love with her, Therefore, I have been composing with her every day, while is more than happiness! How to that she became my girlfriend? I said to she that I love you. Can you get my girlfriend? I would have been composing with you and always stay here by your side and never leave till I die in December 28, 2015 when is always worth the aftertaste of the day. Consequently, every day we are together, learning together, eatting together, sing together, doing a an army of affair while I can't forget.