小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中用词稍显贫乏；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes read books , playing computer game and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.