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With the development of science and technology, an increasing number of robots can be seen taken the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily lives, which bring about concerns to the society. When we come to that robots take the place of human being in industry, on the one hand, people are at less risk if robots can take the place of human beings to do those highly dangerous jobs. On the other hand, unemployment will increase if more and more people were taken place by robots. In case of people's daily lives, people can help people do housework and play with children when the adults are busy in their own things. But it is not beneficial for people to extend their social network if they ignore the importance of signing up for social activities, as a result of their recognition and acceptance being at risk. As it seems to me, such a trend that more and more robots are take the place of human beings in industry and people's daily lives is beneficial for human beings. I think its benefits outweigh the disadvantages.
