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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
从句数量偏少；文章组织结构良好；文章词汇表达丰富，不过拼写检查还需加强。
As is vividly depicted in the picture above,a teenage'parent are wirting a text on computer to their children who is upstairs,for eatting something and their parent are didn't see their children for a long time.Simple as the picture is,the symbolic meaning of it is thought-provoking.Obviously,the picture revealed the fact that modern children was so tend to rotten in computers that overlooking communication with their parent. In my point of view,computers are everywhere in the modern life.Most teenagers are easy to indulge in computer life.However,overusing computers may have nagative effects on themself.First of all,overusing computers will harm children's health.The screen can harm teenage's eye,sit for a long time are comsume so a large time that children can't do exercise.Secondly,computer deprive of teenage's time,they can't do some usefull things. In a word,there is no denying that computer are harmfull for children life.What we need to do is make children more outgoing and make some active to attrctive them.
