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作者词汇基础扎实；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
With the development of science and technology, an increasing number of robots can be seen taken the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily life, which bring about concerns to the society. When we come to that robots take the place of human being in industry, on the one hand, people are at less risk if robots can take the place of human beings to do those highly dangerous jobs. On the other hand, unemployment will increase if more and more people were taken place by robots. In case of people's daily life, people can help people do housework and play with children when the adults are busy with their own things. But it is not beneficial for people to extend their social network if they ignore the importance of signing up for social activities, as a result of their recognition and acceptance being at risk. As for me, I hold the view that robots' taking the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily life is good for people, for which its benefits outweigh the disadvantages.
