2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

应增加文中从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强。

I lived in the HeNan province of China. In my province luoyang and kaifeng are very famous,because both of them are the captial of the ancient dynasties.now i will tell some reasons about why i would like to take my foreigen friends to luoyang and kaifeng. first of all let's talk something about luoyang,it is known for the captial of tang dynasty and a kind of flower.luoyang is a very beautiful city,in there ,you will find many interesting things.