小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Li Li is my good friend. She is very cute. She doesn't like dog. But she like cat. Because it very beautiful. She has big eyes and small nose. She has a little cat. It has a whit hair and big eyes. Today is her birthday party. Many children give her presents, in this picture, She has cake, toy car, toy train, chocolate. She is very happy.